Talk:Timaneus of Djinn/@comment-24287735-20160809112428/@comment-24287735-20160810113448

The grammar looks too casual for a bio article, mate. (phrases like I don't know, risk of being repetitious, exclamatory sentences, etc.) You can be casual, but at least put them in chapter pages if you're interested in making a story or quote them (like how Nobody700 does). Anyway, the strange names really trigger my head to reference Game of Thrones. Thanks for pointing out it's from LOTR, but I'm not familiar with either of these works.