Talk:A Burial to a Friend! A Promise to Help the World Made!/@comment-24507267-20160615185459/@comment-24507267-20160616025634

I think it's a great start to a promising story. Mercury is a pure hearted guy. (Somewhat, I don't know many guys that party all day and all night that don't have flaws that are pretty questionable) that wants to create peace. His drive is something many would find relatable which makes him a great main character. I currently have no problems with your story