Talk:One Piece: The Jolly Age/@comment-3560963-20160616160444/@comment-3560963-20160617180727

Also, thanks for your review, and I do apologize if what I made was a bit..wonky. All first chapters don't start out that great, but set the tone well. Think of what I'm doing as like the Romance Dawn arc as made by the anime. And the transition to battle will make a lot more sense soon, as the post-Orlean Village arc is dedicated to the origins of both Mercury, Pallas, and the Valkyries.