User blog comment:AegisIsKing/A Change of Plans/@comment-24287735-20151010134033/@comment-24318364-20151010151205

That's pretty cool. I mean, unfortunate of course, for your protagonist, but I've always liked powerful intros as much as really long, but elaborately planned out ones (let's be honest, sometimes, it takes just too damn long for One Piece to introduce someone).

I'm glad you can relate with this. It's hard to write tragedy while everyone else writes comedy, but I guess I'm not alone like I thought I was. And, yeah, it does sound pretty hard. But all the more reason to have a go for it.

P.S. Those dancing stars. Seriously. Overkill (in a good way) xD