Talk:A New Pirate Crew Is Introduced! Dangerous Life Pirates!/@comment-5008281-20130720231246

Not a bad start at all. I would really like to see Akki and Taii go at it. Though I think it would be easier to read if there weren't so many people in the scene so suddenly. My advice (take it for what it is) is to lower the number of characters at first and slowly but surely add some more in, especially in the intro. Still a good chapter.