Talk:A Burial to a Friend! A Promise to Help the World Made!/@comment-24507267-20160615185459/@comment-3560963-20160615194209

I did say there'd be a few surprises in my work, didn't I? A surprise member to add into the world they left behind.

Oh, and in case there're those wondering how the Orlean Village can subsist solely on Mardis Gras-style parties and the history between Pallas and Mercury is said to be so deep; don't worry, there's a Post-Orlean Village Arc (don't worry, only two maybe three chapters-worth) before we reach the Timepiece Arc, and gain our next, stronger antagonist: Otto Matro! (Pronounced Ought-Toe Matt-Troe, and why will make more sense when we get there.)

So, honest thoughts here; what do you think of the story thus far? And be as honest as possible, I can take the criticism necessary to move forward.